Aha!Well, I'm less likely to enjoy quietly sharing candy in a dark corner with these starships as I would Anna Torv, but I will strive to enjoy them no less. Much thanks! (Edit comment)
"the contents he finds in his fathers briefcase" father's"some sort of odd climatic show down" climactic - unless you were talking about the weather. Also, "showdown" can be one word.#corrections(Edit comment)
"Their results showed that restricting sleep to six hours per night caused cognitive performance and reaction times so drop so dramatically..." somebody must not've gotten enough sleep the night before when typing this.#corrections(Edit comment)
In the third paragraph:"including those involved with involved in cell signaling, the immune system, response to stress, and changes in temperature."Little hiccup there.#corrections(Edit comment)
When you're pluralizing in English, you're allowed follow English's rules, even if the word is a loan word. Just because a bunch of uptight grammarians in the 17th century thought something was a good idea doesn't make it so forever. (Edit comment)
Small typo - Some astronomers think the ridge was formed a some time in the distant past when Iapetus rotated much faster. should read - Some astronomers think the ridge was formed AT some time in the distant past when Iapetus rotated much faster.#corrections(Edit comment)
"By studying how these carrion dismantle a human meal"I think you left the "-eaters" off of 'carrion-eaters,' unless these were zombie vultures, in which case, ignore my .#corrections(Edit comment)
i refuse to clear my notifications just because it says "CJA replied to your comment"...
even if it was for a lame corrections hashtag #corrections
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